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The graph below shows the employment of women between 16 and 65 years old in five countries from 2003 to 2009.

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開頭段

The line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of employed females across five countries (the UK, Canada, Germany, Chile and Turkey) between 2003 and 2009.

概述段

Overall, the UKconsistently had the highest proportionof women in employment,whileTurkeyrecorded the lowest.Additionally, women in Germanyexperienced the most notable growthin labor force participation during the given period.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- UK數(shù)值一直最高，Turkey數(shù)值一直最低

- Germany數(shù)值變化幅度最大

Body paragraph 1

In 2003, 80% of women in the UK were employed.Aftera marginal growth to85% in 2007, this figurereturned to its original levelof 80% in 2009.By contrast, Canada’s employment ratesaw a slight declinefrom 70% in 2003 to 65% in 2005,beforerising steadily to75% by 2009.Althoughjust half of German women were employed in 2003,there was a significant increase to65% six years later.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- UK：2003年為80%→隨后小小幅度上升到2007年達(dá)到85%→隨后到2009年回落至80%

- Canada：2003年到2005年小幅度下降(70%到65%)→到2009年持續(xù)上升到75%

- Germany：2003年數(shù)據(jù)為50%→隨后顯著上升到2009年達(dá)到65%

Body paragraph 2

In comparison to the UK,female workforce participation in the other two countriesremained lower.Specifically, Chilewitnessed a gradual rise, with the percentage ofemployed womengrowingfrom 40% in 2003 to 50% by 2009.Conversely, in Turkey, the employment ratehalved to10% in the first four years,followed bya modest increase to15% by 2009.

思路要點(diǎn)：其余兩個(gè)國家數(shù)據(jù)較低

- Chile：2003年到2009年逐步上升，從40%上升到50%

- Turkey：2003到2007年數(shù)據(jù)減半到10%→隨后小幅度上升到2009年達(dá)到15%

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