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The plans show how a TV centre looked ten years ago and how it looks now.

主體段分段：按照方位分段

開頭段

The two maps illustrate how a TV center has changed over the past decade.

概述段

Overall,whilethe basic structure and key functional areas of this TV centerhave remained in place, several facilitieshave been expanded, relocated, or repurposed.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 大部分設(shè)施功能不變

- 部分區(qū)域擴(kuò)建、搬遷、功能改變

Body paragraph 1

Ten years ago, a car parkwas situated along the bottom edge, with a wooded arealying to its east.In the present layout, the treeshave been removed to allowthe car park toextend across the full width of the site,significantlyincreasing its capacity.On the left side of the building, the reception areahasremained unchanged.However, the former area for make-up and dressing room,located just north ofthe reception,has been subdivided into several smaller rooms.

思路要點(diǎn)：南邊、最西邊最東邊前后變化對(duì)比

- 10年前南邊有car park，它的東邊是樹林；現(xiàn)在樹林消失，car park擴(kuò)建

- 大樓左側(cè)的reception不變，但它北部的make-up room和 dressin g-room 被細(xì)分成更小區(qū)域

Body paragraph 2

In the central section, the twonorthernofficesare still in their original positions,butthe studiodirectly adjacent to themhas been expanded considerably,resulting inthe reduction in the size ofthe scenery and costume areato its right.Further south, the initial canteenadjacent toanother officehas been converted toa fourth office room. The previously large officeto the easthasalsobeenextendedand now functions as a canteen.This means thatthe studio and waiting roomin the far right cornerhave been slightly reduced in size.

思路要點(diǎn)：中央部分前后變化對(duì)比

- 中央部分，北邊的office不變，但右側(cè)的studio面積擴(kuò)大，scenery、costume區(qū)域面積縮小

- 南邊，canteen改建成第四個(gè)office；原來東邊大的office面積進(jìn)一步擴(kuò)大并改建成canteen；studio、waiting room面積縮小

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