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The map below shows the changes that have taken place at a zoo in Australia between 1960 and now.

主體段分段：一圖一段

開頭段

The maps illustrate the layout of a zoo in Australia, comparing its design in 1960 with its current arrangement.

概述段

Overall,this zoohas experienced noticeable modificationsduring the given period, featuring theintroductionof transportation and recreational amenities,as well astherelocationandremovalof several animal exhibits.

思路要點：

- 變化顯著

- 新增休閑場所、交通更便利，部分設(shè)施地點改變、部分設(shè)施拆除

Body paragraph 1

In 1960, a winding pathran throughthe zoofrom north to south,dividing the area into several sections.The northwestern areahoused African animals,whileAustralian species were kept to the south.On the opposite side of the main path, there was a bird enclosure,adjacent toa seal show thatstood at the end ofa branch roadnearthe harbor.Below them, a chimpanzee habitat was situated, followed by a gift shopfurther south.The entire eastern partof the zoo was designated as a picnic area.

思路要點：1960年

- 一條南北走向的步行道將這個動物園分成了不同部分

- 西北African animals，它南邊是Australian animals

- 步行道對面是bird，附近有seal show(位于分岔路口末端、鄰近harbor)

- 南邊有chimpanzee，最南邊是gift shop，東邊是picnic area

Body paragraph 2

Today,a ferry terminal has been introducedto the west ofthe former harbor, which nowhas been removed tothe northwestern corner. Two new entranceshave been constructedat both ends ofthe main path. The Australian animal habitatremains unchanged,whilethe former African animal section is now dedicated to wild animals.Meanwhile, the seal showhas been moved to the previouschimpanzee habitat, and a smaller habitat for African animalshas been addedto the west.However, the bird enclosurehas been removed. The original gift shophas been expanded intoa two-storey building.Moreover, a newcable carsystem,extending from the northern to the southern part ofthe zoo,has been builtnear the picnic area,significantly improving accessibility for visitors.

思路要點：

- path沒變，但原來harbor的西邊新建了ferry terminal，原來的harbor改址到西北角落

- path南北兩端新增entrance

- 原來Australian animals區(qū)域不變，但African animals區(qū)域被用作wild animals保護區(qū)，

- seal show改建在原來chimpanzee區(qū)域的位置，它西邊新建一個小面積的African animal區(qū)

- bird區(qū)域被拆除

- gift shop被擴建成兩層

- picnic area附近新建南北走向的cable car

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